RE: Save The Date E-mail

 
From: "Thomas Fucillo tfucillo@PROTECTED [OCC_Race_Committee]" <occ_race_comm@PROTECTED>
In-Reply-To: (no subject)
Date: September 11th 2017

Looks great.  Should be “tale” instead of “tail” in the third paragraph.

 

Tom

 

From: occ_race_comm@PROTECTED [mailto:occ_race_comm@PROTECTED]
Sent: Sunday, September 10, 2017 8:30 PM
To: Thomas Fucillo
Subject: [occ_race_comm] Save The Date E-mail

 

 

Tonight, it seemed that we all agreed that we should get the word out about the event. The only other firm details seemed to be the date and that we want to do a Grand Fondo on Sunday. With that in mind, I took a shot at crafting a, "Save The Date," type e-mail, where I tried to sell the event with the details I had the only aspect of the e-mail that is mentioned, but not yet secured, is the soigneurs, but I did not list any by name and have a fair level of confidence that we'll be able to obtain these sponsors.

 

Let me know what you think. Grammatical and context suggestions welcome. If it's good, I'll try to find some action shots from last year to make a more eye catching final draft.

 

--

Joshua F. Graves

 

                                                           

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