I would change "tail" to "tale" and delete the "in" after "enjoying" in that same sentence. Looks great, let's build some buzz about the event!-Colleen
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On Sep 22, 2017, at 7:05 PM, Graves, Joshua gravesjf@PROTECTED [OCC_Race_Committee] <occ_race_comm@PROTECTED> wrote:
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